The Elemental Conductors

The Elemental Conductors

Jesse Wolf

The premise of The Elemental Conductors is that certain people have a gene that is only activate when they almost die in an encounter with a basic element. Joshua is struck by lightning and wakes up with the ability to channel electricity. He and his friend Tony escape capture by Spector agents and join an underground dedicated to keeping Elemental Conductors out of Spector’s hands.

The premise is great. I love the idea of genetic superheroes, and the idea that they need to almost die for their powers.

The problem is that the book needs a good work over by an editor or critique group. The  essential elements are there, but they need polishing. I would encourage the author to work on the book to create a more professional feel to the story and then it will be a book that I can recommend.

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